***This essay is for a College Prep English Class****
TOPIC: A Five-paragraph essay on John Proctor from The Crucible by Arthur Miller. Essay needs to include the significant change John Proctor undergoes and what factors and motiviations contributed to this change.
*****First I need an outline in the format as follows:**********
Introduction: (reference “Title”, Author, Characters and briefly preface the plot)
[Hook…]
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Thesis: (Your thesis should state whether the changes in your character redeem him/her) _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Body Paragraph 1
Transition + Topic Sentence (make a claim: explain what your character is like at the beginning of the play):
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Concrete Detail:
For example (need to include at least one quote from book),
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This shows that…
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This also shows that, or This is because, or This is important because…
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Concluding Sentence: [What is the point of this paragraph?] As a result…
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Body Paragraph 2
Transition + Topic Sentence (make a claim: discuss motivations for your character’s actions and what motivates your character to change):
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Concrete Detail:
For example (need to include at least one quote from book),
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This shows that…
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This also shows that, or This is because, or This is important because…
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Concluding Sentence: [What is the point of this paragraph?] As a result…
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Body Paragrah 3
Transition + Topic Sentence (make a claim: explain what your character is like at the end of the play):
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Concrete Detail:
For example (need to include at least one quote from book),
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This shows that…
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This also shows that, or This is because, or This is important because…
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Concluding Sentence: [What is the point of this paragraph?] As a result…
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Conclusion: (Reemphasize your important points, restate your thesis, end strong) [Transitional word or phrase…]
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****I then need the final draft which is the five-paragraph essay MATCHING the outline–discussing how John Proctor undergoes a significant change and what factors and motivations contribute to this change. **The concrete details in each paragraph need to include the quote from the book used in the outline with cited page number in APA style*** The Crucible by Arthur Miller is the only cited works on the Bibliography page.
**Please e-mail as a Microsoft Word document attachment**** Thank you
