This is the thesis statment that I wrote:
The paper will be discussing how the quality of health insurance offered to diabetics is not adequate enough to keep up with the ever rising costs of care for people who have such a life threatening disease to stay healthy. This topic is important for me to discuss because I face this disease everyday and feel that any information I can relate to others in helping them cope with this disease will help them improve their life.
The paper should be directed clearly to general readers, but should focus on the arguementative topic. At least 6-8 pages of written text, not counting appropriate front and end material. Double-spaced with 12-point font, one inch margins. Incorporate at least 6-8 sources (a combination of traditional paper sources, llibrary database sources, internet sources, and primary research, only two can be obtained from internet) Outline is as follows:
– Intro – do not make statement re: my term paper is going…
Clear thesis statement
Opposing points of view
Recognized thesis
Dealt with them in a way they won’t lingre
– Body of paper
– Summary of paper with a strong conclusion
Paper should be written with a clear progression, not in circles. Make sure transition are clear. Document all information that cames from another outside source and is not common knowledge. Make sure sources are both cited in paper and are included on reference page.


